My new narrative tasks for the cutscene

Charlie wanted me to edit the narrative/story points for the first cut-scene so it establishes more plot and helps the player understand the full story before starting the game.

There are a couple of points I need to work into the story as well as editing some of the previously written things.

  1. The wizards motive needs to be established as to why he’s trying to get Vasalisa. Is it for her powers? to over throw the kingdom? ect ect
  2. The perspective of the story, experiment with who should narrate the story. Faceless narrator, Vasalisa older, Wizard King?
  3. Extra back story?

I’m going to begin working on a new beginning, i think i would like to include a king and queen so Vasalisa’s parents have a back story.

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