Charlie wanted me to edit the narrative/story points for the first cut-scene so it establishes more plot and helps the player understand the full story before starting the game.
There are a couple of points I need to work into the story as well as editing some of the previously written things.
- The wizards motive needs to be established as to why he’s trying to get Vasalisa. Is it for her powers? to over throw the kingdom? ect ect
- The perspective of the story, experiment with who should narrate the story. Faceless narrator, Vasalisa older, Wizard King?
- Extra back story?
I’m going to begin working on a new beginning, i think i would like to include a king and queen so Vasalisa’s parents have a back story.